Monday, August 8, 2011

Spook: Reboot

I don't know if people are still reading this blog but... well... if anybody does, here's an update on Spook.

I've been rewriting the earlier chapters of Spook, tweaking it a little and adding some more details to the story, and I'll be sending the reboot to Nifty soon. I've also added a prologue, which would add a new dimension to the story and will be wrapped up neatly in the end.

So... it's all gonna be done soon... I'm just writing the final chapters and I'll be posting it soon enough. Once it's posted and you've read it, let me know what you think.

Thanks!

Cyrus

5 comments:

RC said...

I just found Spook this week on Nifty and moments ago finished chapter 4....very interesting. I like getting to know the characters little by little. The ghost...not so much. This is a very disturbing tale.

More please!

Kiarra said...

I read your blog to check for updates on your story spook, and I love it! I really feel sorry for Spook, but I also would be interested in seeing Charlie becoming interested in him more than just trying to figure out who he is and what happened. Also I like Danny a lot, and I think the way he is handling this situation is horrible. Maybe if he opened his mouth, and tried to accept spook, he might be able to sort him and Charlie out, but also he might be able to see spook and talk to him. What really has my mind reeling is the fact that Rommels uncle freaked out when he saw "Carlitos" lol but that he was in Olivers cult in the time frame Spook was alive.?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Maybe Charlies like the splitting image of someone who he use to know?? Hmmmm.... anyways let me stop coming up with scenarios, and see if your going to add again! I love this story, and I hope you keep going!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kiarra

Kiarra said...

Omg! this is crazy! Why would oliver be that crazy and do all this just to get charlie to be his sex slave! Because he doesnt want him for any other reason than to turn him into another Marcus. I wonder what hes going to do about Spook! I hope he doesnt hurt him, and that Spook can still protect Charlie from him.

Danny is slowly coming out of his shell and that is great! Now he needs to actually tell charlie how he feels! Its obvious to his friends that he like him!

Charlies dream must be what happened to Spook, but only Spook was danny! That must be why he cant see him! Spook needs to go back to charlie becasue he cant reach him.

Anyways, I love this story, and cant wait for more!

Adamant Friend said...

I totally love the story, all 21 chapters published. Please, post more! Charlie and Danny make my heart melt... :)

Anonymous said...

I am so glad to have another chapter to read. Thank you